tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3918601834627843862.post338538917750006281..comments2022-05-11T11:53:42.467-04:00Comments on Optimism Abounds: Story Review - Toy Story 3Kevin P. Sheridanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07168941416754157928noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3918601834627843862.post-31184499709724240252010-07-15T12:53:03.111-04:002010-07-15T12:53:03.111-04:00Thanks, Perri - plot is always a toughie, especial...Thanks, Perri - plot is always a toughie, especially when you SEE the story in your head, but you gotta fill in all the blanks and keep the thing moving. Just remember two words: FORWARD MOTION. If the book isn't moving forward, if the hero isn't moving towards his goal, it's wasted words...<br /><br />KEEP AT IT!Kevin P. Sheridanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07168941416754157928noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3918601834627843862.post-59846025172355532322010-07-13T12:35:55.441-04:002010-07-13T12:35:55.441-04:00This is a great post!
Funny, when I was watching...This is a great post! <br /><br />Funny, when I was watching "Toy Story 3" with the kids last weekend, I also noticed the way Pixar tightened up the plot-- especially when Woody was trying to decide if he should go back to the Daycare or home to Andy. The stakes kept ratcheting up!<br /><br />Plot is my biggest struggle, so I really appreciate this sort of post.<br /><br />Thanks.<br /><br />PerriPerrihttp://lesserapricots.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.com