Check 'em out. I have no shame. Five iterations, landing four partials. One ended up being my agent at Liza Dawson. Have I mentioned how awesome she is?
Anyway, take a look and feel free to leave any comments or questions here. Later on I'll post the spreadsheet I used to track them in case anyone wants to duplicate it.
These are great, I can really see the progression from the first one to the last one. Thanks for posting!
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First one is very sparse...then you went long...then #4 was cute and well-written, but "in voice" queries are hard to sell.
ReplyDeleteBut the 5th one is great, with terrific results.
Thanks for sharing, Kevin!